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Posted: September 29, 2008
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First Presidential Debate Shows Contrast in Candidates' Personalities

Will Rafey, Senior
Will
Will, a top National Forensic League debater, writes that the first debate between Senator Barack Obama and Senator John McCain was too close to call, but revealed plenty about the candidates' different dispositions and how they want voters to perceive them.
Why this Student Spoke Out
The first of three presidential debates between Obama and McCain was held Sept. 26.

Objectively determining the "winner" of the first presidential debate held on Sept. 26 seems all but impossible. Despite the inevitable cries from pundits of both parties, who easily found ways to justify a McCain or an Obama victory, the general consensus of political analysts appears to conclude that the debate was - at the very least - extremely close. In the absence of a definitive post-debate media spin, a rare opportunity to examine the argumentative and stylistic components of the debate emerges.

Although both candidates employed concise, eloquent, and intelligent arguments, Senator Obama and Senator McCain exhibited strikingly different argumentative styles. While McCain came off as an assertive-yet-aloof veteran, Obama came off as a firm and polite intellectual. In a debate which revolved almost exclusively around detailed policy issues, there were very few ideological outbursts or serious confrontations. And yet, while most presidential debates remain limited to repetitive and carefully edited stump speeches, there were significant clashes between the two candidates.

Obama connects on the economy


In the first topic of discussion, the economy, Obama seemed to hold a slight upper hand. This was not that surprising, given that the current economic crisis coincides with the eighth year of a Republican administration. Obama's relative success could be seen in his strategic decision to connect with both the past and the voter. By continually articulating our economic woes as a "final verdict on eight years," and a testament to the failure of "trickle-down" economics, Senator Obama indicted the ideological basis of McCain's free market conservatism.

Likewise, Obama captivated the audience with his appeal to the average American. Although McCain forcefully invoked the "strength of the American worker," Obama discussed economics in less abstract terms. By asking the simple question which millions of Americans are asking - "how's it going to affect me?" - Obama framed the economic situation less about Washington and more about what ordinary people can relate to - their jobs, their families, their retirement funds, their ability to send children to college. From a purely emotional standpoint, Senator Obama seemed most connected with the audience, as he drew sharp parallels between the dismal economic climate, the failure of the current Republican administration, and the harsh reality most Americans face.

McCain goes on the offensive


Yet, Senator Obama appeared to lose a lot of his charm when the discussion turned to foreign policy, where McCain's extensive experience as a Senator for over two decades inevitably gave him the upper hand. Both Obama and McCain showed a deep knowledge of foreign affairs, and matched each other blow for blow on crucial international issues. However, Senator McCain's numerous anecdotes made his talking points far more personal, and thus easier to connect with, than Obama's many facts.

From a stylistic viewpoint, as the debate continued, McCain became increasingly more assertive, while Obama remained oddly defensive. Some even commented that McCain was somewhat patronizing towards Obama. Rather than referring to his opponent by his first name, Senator McCain referred to him almost exclusively as "Senator Obama," and chose not look at him once throughout the course of the debate. McCain gave off the persona of a hardened veteran to contrast himself against Obama's limited experience. As the debate progressed, McCain's phrasing became increasingly combative, referring at least seven times to Obama's seeming "lack of understanding" about foreign relations.

This combativeness was evident when the two debaters disagreed about a comment made by former Secretary of State Henry Kissinger. Senator McCain finally dismissed Obama's remarks with a biting "oh please," and he memorably lambasted Obama for failing to understand what he termed the "difference between tactics and strategy." And yet, at times McCain appeared visibly uncomfortable, and as his strained grins attest, Obama certainly held his own.

Debate unlikely to change minds

As the debate drew to a close, the two candidates consolidated their defining characteristics. Since both competitors are extremely knowledgeable, the distinction that will become crucial is their personality. McCain was most personable when he tapped into his legacy in the Senate and his time during the Vietnam War. In contrast, Obama emphasized his ability to restore America's influence with a "broader strategic vision," sharing a personal story about his father's dream to attend college in the United States.

It is difficult to draw any one, unified, objective conclusion from the first presidential debate, considering the talent of both competitors. Where for many people, McCain's frosty demeanor inspires trust and respect, for others it sparks resentment and distaste. Likewise, Obama's conciliatory nature has been embraced by supporters as intelligent pragmatism, even wisdom, but by detractors as inexperienced indecision. Ultimately, the debate merely re-entrenched the existing views of already-decided voters, rather than radically shifting the polls as it did for JFK in 1960 and Reagan in 1980. All things considered, the argumentative skills and intelligence of both leaders give promise that the next leader America chooses is bound to be a wise one.


A bit about this Author

Will Rafey is a senior at Bellarmine College Prep in San Jose, Calif. He placed 5th in the 2008 National Forensic League National Speech Tournament policy debate.


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