| Criteria |
4 |
3 |
2 |
1 |
| The Claim
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I make a claim and explain why it is controversial. |
I make a claim but don't explain why it's controversial. |
My claim is buried, confused, and/or unclear. |
I don't say what my argument or claim is. |
| Reasons in support of the claim |
I give clear and accurate reasons in support of my claim. |
I give reasons in support of my claim, but I overlook important reasons. |
I give 1 or 2 weak reasons that don't support my claim and/or irrelevant or confusing reasons. |
I don't give reasons in support of my claim. |
| Reasons against the claim |
I discuss the reasons against my claim and explain why it is valid anyway. |
I discuss the reasons against my claim but neglect some or don't explain why the claim still stands. |
I say that there are reasons against the claim, but I don't discuss them. |
I don't acknowledge or discuss the reasons against the claim. |
| Organization |
My writing has a compelling opening, an informative middle, and a satisfying conclusion. |
My writing has a beginning, a middle, and an end. |
My organization is rough but workable. I may sometimes get off topic. |
My writing is aimless and disorganized. |
| Voice and tone |
It sounds like I care about my argument. I tell how I think and feel about it. |
My tone is okay, but my paper could have been written by anyone. I need to tell how I think and feel. |
My writing is bland or pretentious. There is either no hint of a real person in it, or it sounds like I'm faking it. |
My writing is too formal or informal. It sounds like I don't like the topic of the essay. |
| Word choice |
The words that I use are striking but natural, varied, and vivid. |
I make some fine and some routine word choices. |
The words that I use are often dull or uninspired or sound like I'm trying too hard to impress. |
I use the same words over and over. Some words may be confusing. |
| Sentence fluency |
My sentences are clear, complete, and of varying lengths. |
I have well-constructed sentences. My essay marches along but doesn't dance. |
My sentences are often awkward, run-ons, or fragments. |
Many run-on sentences and sentence fragments make my essay hard to read. |
| Conventions |
I use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling. |
I have a few errors to fix, but I generally use correct conventions. |
I have enough errors in my essay to distract a reader. |
Numerous errors make my paper hard to read. |