Jeremy Bailenson response to James Paul Gee

I actually liked the pace which was methodical and calming and NOT like a video-game trailer.

I do also agree with Marc in that the beginning was probably the slowest part and I thought the viewer spent a bit too much time in Korea...

Doug, to your bigger question, I think the micro components of the piece are all substantial and informative regardless at the pace they are played. The macro issue is one of viewer attention and story arc, and, having zero experience in documentary film production, I don't know how to advise there.